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10/7/08: Eek!
One of the Three Blind Mice Finds Work
By ALARIE TENNILLE



Joie de vivre.   I know the secret.

People don’t expect it from me.

Think I should be bitter scurrying

around, nowhere to nowhere, in my

prison of darkness.  Oh, the flashbacks!

The screams, the dreadful screams—

not knowing where they came from!

“Les souris, les souris!” shrieked

the farmer’s wife.   I could feel the knife

cutting the air.   Heard the pain

of mes amis, but didn’t recognize

my own voice: a high E that smelled

of iron and salt and made me see

light for only a second.   Somehow

I got out of that sharp blackness

into this one, a velvet, welcome black

smelling of lavender, musk, ginger,

and flowers most people can’t name.

It’s my job to mix the scents in right

proportion so no one knows except

another Nose.  Joie de Vivre—the

perfume that’s the talk of Paris.



2008-10-07 13:00:41 GMT
Comments (5 total)
Author:Anonymous
I just want to add that this is a workshop exercise from William Trowbridge's class on writing persona poems. Thanks, Bill! I hope others in the class will post their results here. Visit www.writersplace.org to see what other workshops are on the fall schedule.
--Alarie
<mailto:atenni@mac.com>
2008-10-07 14:04:13 GMT
Author:Anonymous
I don't believe I will think of a mouse (blind or not) scurrying around on my kitchen floor in quite the same way again... Nor Chanel No.5 either.
--Carl Rhoden
2008-10-07 19:17:29 GMT
Author:Anonymous
This poem made me chuckle, Alarie. Nice take on an old rhyme! Carl and I wanted to take that workshop but couldn't make it.
--Lindsey Martin-Bowen
2008-10-08 04:13:23 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Thanks, Lindsey and Carl. Two good reasons for Bill to hold another workshop.

--Alarie Tennille
2008-10-08 11:54:52 GMT
Author:Anonymous
I suspected when I saw the title that this was the product of Bill's workshop. He'll have to do it again at a time more of us can take it. I like the poem, Alarie. It didn't take you long to write it.
--Maryfrances
2008-10-14 01:49:17 GMT
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